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PokeGrowth Part 3:Takeover

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Previously on PokeGrowth:
Ash entered a bodybuilding competition on the word of Rocky (Not going to waste time explaining who he is. Read Part 2!). He won the grand prize of P50,000. This is the third part.

"I am the greatest!" said Ash "I really AM the greatest!"
Ash went backstage and was greeted by Dawn, who ran up and hugged him.
"So," said Ash "How about we go and get my eigth badge now?"
"Actually," said Brock "The Sunyshore gym leader has gone to challenge the Pokemon League, and won't be back for a few days."

Ash was annoyed, but it meant they got to do some sightseeing. They went to the Sunyshore lighthouse first and took the tour. The tour lasted the rest of the day. Everyone was staring at Ash.
"Let them stare!" said a voice inside his head "They're just jealous!"
Ash let them stare. He didn't stop and pose or anything like that, he just let them stare without telling them to buzz off. After the tour they went back to the Pokemon Center to sleep. Ash felt...different. As if his personality was being taken over by something.
"Hey Ash, you still awake?" asked Dawn from somewhere in the darkness.
"Yes," replied Ash "And even if I wasn't I would be now!"
The two of them had a little laugh. Loud enough for each other to hear, but soft enoguh so as not to wake Brock or the other Pokemon.
"You know," said Dawn "I've been thinking about today."
Oh?" said Ash "How so?"
"Well I'm not very sure," replied Dawn "but I've just been thinking..."
"Is it about my new body?" asked Ash
"...yeah" said Dawn, though hesitating before answering.
"Well I just want you to know," said Ash "That even though I have a new body and everything, I won't change."
"That's good," said Dawn "Because I like you just the way you are!"
Exhausted from the days events, the two of them fell asleep.

The next day Ash woke up feeling a little weird after his heart to heart with Dawn. Dawn wouldn't look him in the eye, and when he turned to meet her gaze she looked away. They went to look at the solar pannel bridges.
"Brock you go ahead." said Ash
"Ok." replied Brock
After Brock had left Ash saud to Dawn:
"Why are you ignoring me?" asked Ash
"Well..." said Dawn "I feel really weird after last night. It made me realize I-I-I..."
"Go on." said Ash
"I have feelings for you ok!" said Dawn, savagely.
"Well...me too." replied Ash
Dawn blushed. Her face turned a brilliant scarlet.
Ash bent close to Dawn. Before he could kiss her however, something happened. The voice inside Ash's head had been waiting for the moment when Ash dropped his guard so it could take over. Ash's eyes glowed red. He ripped off his shirt and pants and roared. He jumped off the solar pannel bridge and ran off in the direction of Lake Valor.
"Oh not again!" exclaimed Dawn as she went off to find Brock.

To Be Continued in Part 4...
Part 3 of my PokeGrowth series. This is probably one of the shortest parts of my story.
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wbender2467's avatar
What did she mean by 'again'? You should've elaborated on that voice in Ash's  head in the previous chapter... Other than that, I'm impressed!